I am in a dark forest. I feel dead grass on my fingers, bugs crawling on my hands. I am so weak and tired. My beautiful butterfly is on my chest. I am lying on a tree. I only remember the Dark King’s soldiers taking me somewhere. I can see dead trees I can hear wolves howling. I can smell smoke and something cooking or is it something cooking? My tummy rumbles.
I walk to the smell with my butterfly on my hand. I see a small little house, I knock on the door and I see a beaver that can talk. She said oh dear and walked me inside.The nice beaver washed me and gave me some new clothes to wear. Then suddenly I heard someone knocking on the door. The beaver said wait in the room I will get i.t It was the soldiers. I froze . I got my butterfly and we flew as fast as we could. I push the soldiers as hard as I can.And sprinted as fast as I can. My heart is beating so fast . I am huffing and puffing. I am starting to get a stitch.
Then I saw an ice gate over it was sunny and beautiful trees , growing grass and lakes . I climbed the gate .2 years later I am going to build a house and I am having a lovely life. The end
Hi Kauri
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained were you were, and how you did all your punctuation.
From Lily