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Friday 11 September 2020

My Journey

   My Journey 

In 2019 I went to Waiouru to see my dad at work. It was a long trip. It was snowy. We stayed at a motel .It was cool, big and fancy. When we had put our bags inside we went to the shop. We got a Rainbow slushie. Then we walked back to the hotel and had some pizza . The next day we got up early in the morning so we could see dad at the army camp  assembly. My dad got an award for most improved soldier.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous27 November 2020 at 11:42

    Hey Kauri!

    I like how you used so much creativity for this post. I don't have any suggestions because this story is already awesome!
    I have never seen snow but I can imagine that its really cool!
    - Sophie :)

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